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Why was Martha not treated like they have rights?

For me personally Martha wasn't treated right because she wasn't allowed to do pretty much everything because she is righteous. People were making fun of her clothes because it was made by her mother and they think that it's old fashioned and that Martha should get clothes that are not made by her mother. There was a child in the cellar for the past 7 years and Martha didn't wanna tell anyone about it because she doesn't want her parents to get in trouble and she still loves them.

Martha didn't have any friends because people were thinking of her differently and treating her differently which makes her feel that she is not welcome there at all. Scott became her friend because he was willing to help Martha about what was going on but at the same time he was afraid that he would get treated the same way as they treated Martha because he is hanging out with her but that didn't stop him from being friends with Martha.

Martha wasn't allowed to bring friends at her house because her parents don't allow her at all just because she is righteous and that she can't really do anything about it but follow. Scott found out about it and when Martha is with Scott she feels free and that she is happy that she finally has a friend which made her gain trust on Scott quite a lot because of how Scott showed that he is trustworthy and won't tell anything to anyone of what Martha told him.  

She eventually told Scott that there was an abomination in her house that is in the cellar which no one knows about but only her parents and her. Martha and Scott worked together to fix what what was going on about the rights of putting a child in the cellar which is against the law because no one should be put in a cellar because they wouldn't know what the outside world is and that they wouldn't feel any freedom if they can't even do anything they want because they have to keep following what they are told to do or else there would be consequences.

When Martha and Scott hang out together they would get fun because Scott is hanging out with Martha that wears clothes that were made by her mother and both of them would get bullied and would get treated differently like they don't belong to where they are. But they both don't care anymore because they are now only focusing on themselves to what is right because people haven't heard what they have gone through and also don't know who they are so that's why Martha and Scott don't listen to those negative thoughts anymore because they ain't true.

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Abomination workbook chapter 14-17

The theme of bullying

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10 words that I wasn't unsure about from the book. Chapter 1-13.

The Springbok Tour Protests

The Springbok Tour Protest Questions

1. What is another word for apartheid?
Another word for apartheid is separated.

2. Why did the protestors need helmets?
They wore helmets because the police use these special long batons.

3. Why do you think being called honorary whites upset Maori All Blacks?
Maybe because it was racist and that it's not very necessary to say it to them because it was rude.

4. Why the Hamilton rugby game cancelled?
It was canceled because hundreds of anti-tour protestors occupied the field chanting.

5. Do you think this protest was successful? Why? Why not?
I don't think it was successful because the police smashed them with their batons

6. How do you think the New Zealand protests helped Nelson Mandela?
New Zealand helped Nelson Mandela to get voted and made them think about how they treat others in their country.

Burger Plan

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Stop animal testing

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The Power Sentence 

If you waffle a lot, try starting your sentence with a power of 12 words or less.

Example: Money route of all evil.                                                                                                                                       What is right, isnt always popular.                                                                                                                   Hard work leads to positive results.

'Popularity is not all about getting what you want.'

'Being clever doesn't mean you can get everything right.'

The 'Red, White and Blue' Sentence:

Use this sentence style when you have several ideas to convey about a topic.

    Examples: Successful students are focused, hard working and punctual. 

                      The Earth's Key resources are clean air, fresh water and natural environments.                                        Sunshine, water and friends make for a perfect weekend adventure.

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The 'W' Sentence - Makes the sentence sound thoughtful and knowledgeable.

Remember the rule: Not every 'w' word works as a sentence starter.

                                Remember to put the comma in when the parts 

                                affected by your 'w' word are finished. 

Examples - Who, while, whereas, when where, what, whilst, with 

Whilst the class was eating, I read my book.

Where you like chocolate, other prefer candy.

My own sentence of 'w':

What book you read, you cannot read again because you have to do something else.

Whereas some people doesn't like to listen to music, but I do.

Where homeless people live, is different from other people who has a house. 

Task 1: Select 4 Adverbs from the list below 

            and write 4 Adverb starter sentence.

Suddently, I decided to listen to music while fixing my items.

Excitedly, I hugged my best friend because I love the hugs that I get from my best friend. 

Surprisingly, I finished my work in time once the bell rang.

Often, I forget to read my book. 

Task 2: Select 4 Prepositions from the list  below

            and write 4 Preposition starter sentences. 

Under the table, there was a lot of dirt that needed to be cleaned. 

Between the gaps, I decided to decorate it so that it wouldn't be empty.

In the cupboard, there were a lot of stuffs that need to be organized.  

On the table, I saw a leftover chocolate and I ate it.

Task 3: Put the correction punctuation into these sentences:

Silently, the cat stalked its prey.

In 1975, a high school was finally built in Hornby.

Amongst the papers, i found my homework.

Anxiously, i awaited my test results.

Fortunately, the kai today was something good.

About twenty years ago, a law was passed that changed everything.

Often, the things we say and the things we mean are two different things.

Cautiously, he knocked on the principals door and await a reply.

The 'ing' sentence 

Use the - ing version of the verb e.g to run - running 

Remember the rule - When you finish your - ing phrase, place a comma,

                                        then write the rest of the sentence.

Some - ing words - listening, watching, running, realizing, emerging, grasping, speaking,                                                   analyzing, signaling, exposing, gossiping, acknowledging, 

Examples - Realising the danger, people fled from the cities. 

                      Shaking away the nerves, he walked towards the microphone.   

                      Acknowledging the speaker, he bowed his head in silence.

My own sentences of 'ing'

Running around too much made my stomach hurt.  

Realizing that I was about to be late for school, I rushed to get there in time.

Making things on your own is quite hard 

Task 1: Select -ing verbs from the list below and write -ing starter sentences.

Noticing, a lot of people wondering around the park.

Observing, the amount of paper that I have gotten.

Insisting, my classmate to do whatever he wants in the work.

Task 2: Select 4 'w' words from the list below and write 4 'w' starter sentences.

While I was walking, I saw a lot of dogs in the park.

When it was rainy, many people where playing in the rain.

Whereas, some people doesn't wanna learn guitar or piano but I do.

Where the plant is planted, is gonna stay there forever.

Task 3: Put the correction punctuation into these sentences.

Emerging from the depth, the monster sought its new prey.

When the baking was complete, the ovens were cleaned thoroughly.

Committed to improving their routine, the dancers trained daily.

Overpowered by the wave, the swimmers were swept off their feet.

Analyzing the situation, the commander decided the hill route was best.

While we were watching, the experiment the paper ignited.

Hoping to improve his score, Matthew studied his times tables daily.

With their friends and family watching, the students took to the stage.

Undaunted by the work, the builders pushed on to repair the house.

The 'ed' sentence

Use the ed version of the verb e.g to jog - jogged. This makes for a punchy start to your sentence.

Remember the rule: When you finish your ed phrase, place a comma, then write the rest of the                                          sentence.

Some -ed words - frustrated, surprised, excited, committed, undaunted, determined,                                                         overpowered, concerned, cornered, delighted, enthralled. 

Examples - Determined to win, Tony pushed himself the last metres of the sprint. 

                      Frustrated by the ongoing rain, I stared out the window.

My examples of the 'ed' sentences.

Surprised that I passed in my Maths.

Frustrated by the work, that made me stressed about it. 

Excited to talk to my best friend, I rushed to grab my phone.