I am a student at in Uru MÄnuka. In 2020 I was a year 8 and in 2021 I will be a year 9. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Thursday, 15 March 2018
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say
3. Something thoughtful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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Your writing is good. You also have good background and you describe the character pretty cool i think. You have made a pretty good job. Can i ask you a question: how many days or weeks did until you finished.
ReplyDeletethank you Eunize
ReplyDeleteYour writing is amazing you also have fun and cool background and you describe your character really well. I have never been ice skating before. You have made a pretty good job.one question: how many days or weeks did it take you to finished?
ReplyDeleteyou just copied the same word as my friend you only said some of it wow :/
Deleteand you changed some of it :/ next time make your own words :/
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