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Thursday, 15 March 2018

character description


5 comments:

  1. Your writing is good. You also have good background and you describe the character pretty cool i think. You have made a pretty good job. Can i ask you a question: how many days or weeks did until you finished.

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  2. Your writing is amazing you also have fun and cool background and you describe your character really well. I have never been ice skating before. You have made a pretty good job.one question: how many days or weeks did it take you to finished?

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    1. you just copied the same word as my friend you only said some of it wow :/

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    2. and you changed some of it :/ next time make your own words :/

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