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Friday, 15 June 2018

My poem


2 comments:

  1. hi liyah.
    i really like the way that you describe what she way saying
    perhaps you could add more details.
    this reminds me of when i also did it

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  2. Hi Liyah I really liked this poem
    Next time maybe you can check your work and make sure it makes sense,
    I remember I also did this.

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