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Friday, 24 May 2019

3G4G Trip


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we went to the Fo Guang Shan Buddhist Temple in Riccarton.

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Write a paragraph to recount your experience on our trip.  
Write about:
  • When we went
  • Who was with you
  • What you did (think about the order you did things)
  • How you felt and why you felt this way

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  • Choose your words carefully
  • Write in full sentences (6-8 sentences is a paragraph)
  • Take care with your spelling and punctuation
  • Give your writing a title if you want to
  • Check your work: read it through and fix any mistakes you find

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  • Using full stops and capital letters in ALL the right places
  • Self-editing your work to improve and fix up simple mistakes
  • Peer-editing with a buddy; your buddy must write you a comment
  • Sharing your work to your blog
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Author: Buddy:
Buddy Comment:

On Tuesday the 14th of May we went to 3G4G in Riccarton to learn all about the Buddhist Temple. At the start we learn about saying good words think good thoughts and do good deeds. We got to do lots of different types of things and activities like we got a flower activity of making one and it will turn into a bracelet and we watch a video about 3G4G and there was this girl who was helping the poor man, she gave him a cup of water so that he can have strength so that he can stand up and do some things. After we finish doing does things we get to eat cookie and drink some water, after we eat and drink water we went in the bus and we went back to school and we went home after we went back to school.

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