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Wednesday 23 June 2021

Write that Essay #3

 Write that Essay #3

The Power Sentence 

If you waffle a lot, try starting your sentence with a power of 12 words or less.

Example: Money route of all evil.                                                                                                                                       What is right, isnt always popular.                                                                                                                   Hard work leads to positive results.

'Popularity is not all about getting what you want.'

'Being clever doesn't mean you can get everything right.'


The 'Red, White and Blue' Sentence:

Use this sentence style when you have several ideas to convey about a topic.

    Examples: Successful students are focused, hard working and punctual

                      The Earth's Key resources are clean air, fresh water and natural environments.                                        Sunshine, water and friends make for a perfect weekend adventure.



Children under 14 should not have cellphones

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Children under 14 should not have cellphones. (Disagree)



Thursday 17 June 2021

Write that Essay Sentences

The 'W' Sentence - Makes the sentence sound thoughtful and knowledgeable.

Remember the rule: Not every 'w' word works as a sentence starter.
                                Remember to put the comma in when the parts 
                                affected by your 'w' word are finished. 

Examples - Who, while, whereas, when where, what, whilst, with 

Whilst the class was eating, I read my book.
Where you like chocolate, other prefer candy.

My own sentence of 'w':

What book you read, you cannot read again because you have to do something else.
Whereas some people doesn't like to listen to music, but I do.
Where homeless people live, is different from other people who has a house. 

Task 1: Select 4 Adverbs from the list below 
            and write 4 Adverb starter sentence.

Suddently, I decided to listen to music while fixing my items.
Excitedly, I hugged my best friend because I love the hugs that I get from my best friend. 
Surprisingly, I finished my work in time once the bell rang.
Often, I forget to read my book. 

Task 2: Select 4 Prepositions from the list  below
            and write 4 Preposition starter sentences. 

Under the table, there was a lot of dirt that needed to be cleaned. 
Between the gaps, I decided to decorate it so that it wouldn't be empty.
In the cupboard, there were a lot of stuffs that need to be organized.  
On the table, I saw a leftover chocolate and I ate it.

Task 3: Put the correction punctuation into these sentences:

Silently, the cat stalked its prey.

In 1975, a high school was finally built in Hornby.

Amongst the papers, i found my homework.

Anxiously, i awaited my test results.

Fortunately, the kai today was something good.

About twenty years ago, a law was passed that changed everything.

Often, the things we say and the things we mean are two different things.

Cautiously, he knocked on the principals door and await a reply.


The 'ing' sentence 

Use the - ing version of the verb e.g to run - running 

Remember the rule - When you finish your - ing phrase, place a comma,
                                        then write the rest of the sentence.

Some - ing words - listening, watching, running, realizing, emerging, grasping, speaking,                                                   analyzing, signaling, exposing, gossiping, acknowledging, 

Examples - Realising the danger, people fled from the cities. 
                      Shaking away the nerves, he walked towards the microphone.   
                      Acknowledging the speaker, he bowed his head in silence.

My own sentences of 'ing'

Running around too much made my stomach hurt.  
Realizing that I was about to be late for school, I rushed to get there in time.
Making things on your own is quite hard 

Task 1: Select -ing verbs from the list below and write -ing starter sentences.
Noticing, a lot of people wondering around the park.
Observing, the amount of paper that I have gotten.
Insisting, my classmate to do whatever he wants in the work.

Task 2: Select 4 'w' words from the list below and write 4 'w' starter sentences.
While I was walking, I saw a lot of dogs in the park.
When it was rainy, many people where playing in the rain.
Whereas, some people doesn't wanna learn guitar or piano but I do.
Where the plant is planted, is gonna stay there forever.

Task 3: Put the correction punctuation into these sentences.

Emerging from the depth, the monster sought its new prey.

When the baking was complete, the ovens were cleaned thoroughly.

Committed to improving their routine, the dancers trained daily.

Overpowered by the wave, the swimmers were swept off their feet.

Analyzing the situation, the commander decided the hill route was best.

While we were watching, the experiment the paper ignited.

Hoping to improve his score, Matthew studied his times tables daily.

With their friends and family watching, the students took to the stage.

Undaunted by the work, the builders pushed on to repair the house.



The 'ed' sentence

Use the ed version of the verb e.g to jog - jogged. This makes for a punchy start to your sentence.

Remember the rule: When you finish your ed phrase, place a comma, then write the rest of the                                          sentence.

Some -ed words - frustrated, surprised, excited, committed, undaunted, determined,                                                         overpowered, concerned, cornered, delighted, enthralled. 

Examples - Determined to win, Tony pushed himself the last metres of the sprint. 
                      Frustrated by the ongoing rain, I stared out the window.

My examples of the 'ed' sentences.

Surprised that I passed in my Maths.
Frustrated by the work, that made me stressed about it. 
Excited to talk to my best friend, I rushed to grab my phone.



Tuesday 15 June 2021

Hi and welcome to this blog. Today I will be showing you what I did in Types of Government with my partner. Here is what it looks like.











Thursday 10 June 2021

Write that Essay

 The Adverb Sentence: 

Adverbs describe verbs. e.g Surprisingly, Confusingly, Firstly, Remarkably, Often 

Adverb sentence starters add interest or intrigue to our work. 

Remember the rule: when you start a sentence with an adverb, place a comma after the adverb then writhe                                    the rest of the sentence.

Examples - Accidentally, Shockingly, Concerningly, Excitedly, Significantly, Similarly, Simply, 

        Simply, I added the milk to the butter. 

        Shockingly, the lunch today was served hot. 

  Ex.

Simply, the students wrote down a few sentences about the Adverb.

Shockingly, many people decided to write down a lot of sentences.

Suddenly, it started to rain.

Unfortunately, it was very cold today.

Finally, we had free time after doing a lot of work.

Thankfully, my best friend is always there for me.


The Preposition Sentence:

Examples - In, Against, Between, Over, Behind, Within, Under, Below, At, For, Throughout, Near, About

A preposition gives location or movement.

Remember the rule: when you start the sentence with a preposition, you need to put a coma in the movement or positions ends. 

        In the beginning, we talked a lot. 

        Throughout the lesson, I tried not to fall asleep,

        Near the basketball court, is the rubbish bin. 


Ex.

There is some milk, in the fridge.

She was hiding, under the table. 

They were sitting, by the tree. 



Wednesday 9 June 2021

Cats make better pets than dogs

 Cats make better pets than dogs

Hello and welcome to this blog, today I will be showing you my work about Cats make better pets than dogs. 



Hypothesis: Dogs are much more fun than cats because they are a lot more playful than cats.

Idea 1 They promote physical well being - exercising.  

Idea 2 They promote physical well being - compassion, friendship and kindness

Idea 3 All the things wrong with cats that dogs don't do - Scratching random things in anywhere.  

Friday 4 June 2021

Verbal communication

Hello and welcome to this blog, today I will be showing you what I have written about verbal communication.






Thursday 3 June 2021

Jacinda Ardern speech

 Hello welcome to my blog, today I will be showing you what I wrote for my speech about Jacinda Ardern